Idea for Shots and Plot

First Thriller Ideas ?

I planned to create my Thriller Video with my mate Marcel Lex, so we can split the work into two equal blocks.
We both definitely tend to a genre, which includes action and crime. 
My first idea or idea for a scene of the opening scene was a victim which is chased by a criminal. There are close-ups on the shoes and ripped trousers of the victim, while he\she is running through the forrest. The audience is able to hear the crinkle of the leaves and the breathing of the victim. 
For the criminal there is maybe a over the shoulder an express the situation. A close-up on a gun or a knife would maybe a good idea, as well.